Another Flogging
Ray Rhamey,
of Flogging the Quill, was nice enough to take a look at my rewritten
chapter one. Ray’s blog specializes in helping writers craft a compelling first
page to capture the reader and compel them to turn the page. It is thought that
this will also help capture an agent’s/publisher’s attention as well.
I had submitted my first chapter to him two years ago and Ray was unconvinced that it was a page turner. Due to other reasons as well, I decided to do a major rewrite of my novel.
Today Ray has the first page of my novel up on his blog. Check it out and vote if you like. Would you turn the page? Would you set the story down and move on to another?
Let me know.
I had submitted my first chapter to him two years ago and Ray was unconvinced that it was a page turner. Due to other reasons as well, I decided to do a major rewrite of my novel.
Today Ray has the first page of my novel up on his blog. Check it out and vote if you like. Would you turn the page? Would you set the story down and move on to another?
Let me know.
Stella out!
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